~ Désespoir! Pourquoi? ~ Comments

I am a simple lay man. Your poems are like climbing everest for me. I have to drown more and more to explore you, I mean your poems.

Wow, fantastic use of vocabulary (honestly I have a very good volcabulary but, a few words I had to look up) and to get it all to work with rythem and flow. It was a great read and made me think about it after for quite awhile. Beautifully written :)

I find no time … stay in-tune With my tune cadence love is the harmony of the spheres, without harmony of universal love consideration, a song of beauty is lost, a world of beauty is lost, souls and love is lost

It took me some time to understand but it was time well spent. Once I understood, I really thought the poem was ecstatic. A fantastic feeling communicated in an extremely nice poetic way. Let it be real!

very good vocabulary, if a little out of reach for MY mind... keep writing! :)

Dear, you do poetry good! You know how to combine and separate the elements of poetry.You do not bridle your senses leaving them to roam free. Poetry is: efferv-ence conflu-ence ending, emerg-ence Your images blow my mind! 'You Go Girl' [ my grand children's words LOL]

i don't know... but of you'll ask me, this is like a song that can be played with a violin! nice write here ma'am!

‘Poetry with difference Poetry with effervescence Poetry with confluence Poetry with emergence! ’ - AB Thanks Ma’am for such an amazing poem 10++ AB London

Read Ms. Nivedita’s 'Ich bin ein Künstler [Fusion Poetry'.] She is fond of polyglot expression of emotion and indeed is novel and splendid. Full of metaphors in verse one to three well chiseled resultant golden nuggets. Poetic apprehension of union with Universe is very much appropriate and substantiated by poet’s ‘Itsy-bitsy Sprite wee bittie’ state Still questioning ‘Désespoir! Pourquoi? [Despair! Why? ] to and fro state of emotion. Finally poet in a state of 'fantasy’ because of Universe’s ‘gorgeous loftiness’. 10++ dr.sakti

Well tailored contemplative poem… ‘…stay in-tune//With my tune cadence…’ We’re in intoned-intuned with your euphonic poetic cadence… 10++ D. V.

Excellent poem with good diction. Well expressed. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

The words 'Desespoir Pourquai' sound abracadabra to me.

Majestic…magnificent…magical… baronial… Poet explained her despair and resultant surrender as in confusion her feelings are but ‘Is my mentation a fantasy? ’ Again questions in form of answer ‘Know not but.’ A very well conclusion and bosom-candy poem… 10++

very interesting and lovely.

Expressive and imaginative Enjoy reading Congratulations Rgds Nooruddeen

With vast Universe [‘Universe unites me/Pullulates in me/In majestic sublime /Valor of purepurple]… Poet voluted-in herself [‘buoy twee/Itsy-bitsy Sprite wee bittie] Finally confused [‘Is my mentation a fantasy? ] Indeed such submissiveness comes when one faces Universe… RNT also described his awe in lyrics such feelings Overall it’s a very beautiful composition 10+++

Beautiful expression...with rich vocabulary... Good crafting... I also don't know...those why's ... It touched me

I think poetry is somehow different from prose. so, we can't expect a totality from it. Essence is valuable which 'unites me with the universe but time not always permit' what, which we want, desire etc. Words are not only the poetry, but a part to express the hidden talks of the soul, where sounds are very important. So many words may be the content of different language-dictionaries yet which touches me that is also sufficient to get the flavour of a turbulant soul who is long in the prison of a certain globe and tries to attain a life more than life. A horse... A horse.... My kindom for a horse

ah.. its a bit abstract.. still got the essence of good poetry.. good

Very unique, but that is your trademark. Excellent.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra