~ Désespoir! Pourquoi? ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Dear, you do poetry good! You know how to combine and separate the elements of poetry.You do not bridle your senses leaving them to roam free. Poetry is: efferv-ence conflu-ence ending, emerg-ence Your images blow my mind! 'You Go Girl' [ my grand children's words LOL]

i don't know... but of you'll ask me, this is like a song that can be played with a violin! nice write here ma'am!

‘Poetry with difference Poetry with effervescence Poetry with confluence Poetry with emergence! ’ - AB Thanks Ma’am for such an amazing poem 10++ AB London

Read Ms. Nivedita’s 'Ich bin ein Künstler [Fusion Poetry'.] She is fond of polyglot expression of emotion and indeed is novel and splendid. Full of metaphors in verse one to three well chiseled resultant golden nuggets. Poetic apprehension of union with Universe is very much appropriate and substantiated by poet’s ‘Itsy-bitsy Sprite wee bittie’ state Still questioning ‘Désespoir! Pourquoi? [Despair! Why? ] to and fro state of emotion. Finally poet in a state of 'fantasy’ because of Universe’s ‘gorgeous loftiness’. 10++ dr.sakti

Well tailored contemplative poem… ‘…stay in-tune//With my tune cadence…’ We’re in intoned-intuned with your euphonic poetic cadence… 10++ D. V.

I am a simple lay man. Your poems are like climbing everest for me. I have to drown more and more to explore you, I mean your poems.

Wow, fantastic use of vocabulary (honestly I have a very good volcabulary but, a few words I had to look up) and to get it all to work with rythem and flow. It was a great read and made me think about it after for quite awhile. Beautifully written :)

I find no time … stay in-tune With my tune cadence love is the harmony of the spheres, without harmony of universal love consideration, a song of beauty is lost, a world of beauty is lost, souls and love is lost

It took me some time to understand but it was time well spent. Once I understood, I really thought the poem was ecstatic. A fantastic feeling communicated in an extremely nice poetic way. Let it be real!

very good vocabulary, if a little out of reach for MY mind... keep writing! :)