Thursday, October 11, 2012

D & G Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rain drops hiding my tears
Holding inside deep, all of my fears
Of doom and gloom I write
Dark heavy clouds, no sunlight.
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Robert Green
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Shahzia Batool 31 October 2012

what an oblique title Robert! i must say it is the brand of life. isn't it? D & G...but as Hemingway puts it: The Sun Also Rises... your adherence to the rhyming school of thought is the vital sign of your poetry...in these times of Free-for-all...as far as new forms of poetry are concerned...it's good: Try to keep your mind light...

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Valerie Dohren 15 October 2012

We all feel doomy and gloomy at times Robert - good write.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 October 2012

Poignant but look how gr8 it turned out to b as a poem so marvelous in flow n rhymin.

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