Sunday, December 22, 2024

D Feminine Comments

Rating: 5.0

All my life I have marveled at the beauty of the woman
The incredible little details that describe this gender
The soft voice, the alluring eyes, & gentle nature
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James Haedle
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Good poem. But you could stay away from the mesogynic expressions like "..have her" and " belong to another"… four stars is what I give

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