Friday, November 21, 2008

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Rating: 2.9

Oh! darkness, shrivel, shrink
and vanish from the minds
when dawn arrives on its
golden chariot.
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Rema Prasanaa
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Saadat Tahir 13 June 2009

hi rema... a was pleasently awed to gingerly tread your poem Redeem the dark, cruel, harsh angst from minds and tame those fatuous clouds very beautiful poem indeed.... a strong message for peace and righteous beauty great cheers

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Raj Nandy 02 December 2008

Rema this is truly great! It did remind me of the early sixties of my college days, when good old classical poetry was read and inhaled! 20/10! Raj Nandy

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Mithali Vasudev 22 November 2008

dawn is graceful and full of bright light. good work 10

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Gayatri Nambiar 22 November 2008

it is better to light a few lamps to spread light to clear the darkness 10

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