Friday, June 6, 2014

Cygnus Delta Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through a tall grove, by a mouse stream,
Basking on a knoll in noonday
Watching, as the sunlight drowns in green
Living in a bubble out from pain
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Kevin Patrick
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* Sunprincess * 01 July 2014

............loved this one from beginning to end....only I was truly expecting and hoping for one more stanza....but the poet's notes at the end was truly a pleasure to read like having dessert after dinner.....definitely adding this one to my favourite poem collection....truly enjoyed this fantastic piece...

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 June 2014

Wow stellar. Whisks me into another galaxy i must say. Awesome flying muse. And the mythical take is entertaining. I like the sound of cygnus.

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Colleen Courtney 07 June 2014

A wonderful and enchanting read! Thanks for the added Poet's note. I still love reading the Greek Myths!

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