Tuesday, July 1, 2008

Cycle Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you hold your new born
In your arms for the first time,
You forget how much pain you have borne
And nurtured in your womb to give it life.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Vidi Writes 29 September 2008

Once again with your sweet simplicity You have put before us a wonderful life cycle Yes its this 'cycle', If understood well - We can behave better We can tolerrate better We can understand better ... and what not.. Can work wonders with relations Reading this poem is - Like moving in a rowing boat Taking a full view of surroundings Oh.. Nice of you.. and this write. Thank you dear poet.

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Marilyn Lott 23 August 2008

Lovely poem about mother and daughter and so much more. I am planning for my daughter's 40th birthday soon and I know just what you mean. She is still my baby. Keep writing and sharing. This is a '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Raj Nandy 08 July 2008

Yes, your last para convincingly says it all! I also liked Reema's comments! -Raj Nandy

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Rema Prasanna 01 July 2008

This is a beautifully penned cycle of life.. it is accurate to hold in hand a bond so exceptional.... so caring so loving and so sharing.... parent - child unique bond... I rate this high.. Rema

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