Cycle Of Life Comments

'How beatiful youth is, that flies nevertheless' Lorenzo the Magnificent wrote. More or less you wrote the same thing.

dear amanda, the realities of earthly life and its flow into unknown is beautifully depicted in this poem.my vote i give you.

the bluntness and frankness of it portrays the meaning i feel at the moment. very gorgeous.

Hi Amanda, this delicately penned piece, has a really strong tone...yet some how there's a sweet softness contained...nice job. keep this gift going Amanda best wishes Jon