Wednesday, July 7, 2010

Cycle Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.9

Off the branches, the leaves snap off
On this soil, the forage piles on

Back to nutrients, the leaves go back
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David Beckham
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Sally Plumb Plumb 12 May 2011

Nice, nice. Try my elongated version. 'Village Tree'. Thanks.

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Marieta Maglas 21 July 2010

abstract lines that invite deep thought, nice reflective poem

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 July 2010

Deep Poetry ...symbolizing Life Cycle… nimiety in economy congrats for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Rhythym and harmony of nature! Nothing is lost. Wonderful poem! ; D

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Tom Miron 13 July 2010

Great poem. Love the choice of words :)

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Kesav Easwaran 11 July 2010

Truthful philosophy in few phrases...creative...good work...10

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Meggie Gultiano 11 July 2010

Out to live, another leaf shoots out .......................... this is a beautiful line. I love it

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David Beckham

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