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well you are excellent teacher too.........10

it is wonderful story of man from childhood youth and old age, when he crawls like kitty then on two legs and on old age he needs stick t o walk

Hmm, a riddle in the last stanza, and the answer is man. Why? in the morning, he has 4 legs (when man is a baby) in the noon, he has 2 (when man is a grown up) and in afternoon, he has 3...... (when man is a elderly person whose walk is aided by a walking stick) It is an interesting piece with biological references especially the stages of life and respiration.

Very interesting piece. But well written poem. Enjoyed reading it 10+

Lady this is fun but it leaves me perplexed I don't know the answer But I do know what you get if you cross an elephant with a mouse, a very big mouse................give us the answer please regards

....this poem is cute.....

very interesting! ! ! yet study of biology never allow us to know such kind of species losing leg after leg from four to two by the afternoon, may be genetically maneuvered recent most hybrid from ex-biology! ! ! ! ! smile, thanks for sharing, kindly i lose my psyche to guess the object.............

interesting write lady 10