Thursday, November 13, 2008

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I sit here, sad and lonely,
speaking to the sea.
As it's kindly listening to me,
in this little house that's empty.
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Carol Lovelady 23 November 2008

I can relate to the sadness and loneliness in this poem, and longing for that love to come back to you. The empty home, the empty heart...very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 November 2008

Very sad poem, pulled at my heart strings.

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Aijaz Asif 16 November 2008

very beautiful write indeed with so much pain, thoughts of loneliness and yearning for the love to come back...bravo thanks 10+++++

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Caroline Weeks 13 November 2008

'far off, there's you, and me...' I love the last line...this poem has such a lonesome, breezy quality...I can almost feel myself being swallowed up by the singularity that one feels being on a beach. Beautiful write...10 from me. Caroline

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