Sunday, July 23, 2006

Cybercouch Comments

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Where do you go when your world falls apart,
When words that were said burn a hole in your heart,
Inside you're bleeding, you can't stop the pain
It simply engulfs you like cold winter rain;
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Linda Ori
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Nimal Dunuhinga 31 July 2006

I too drowned in the deep sorrow!

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Nalini Hebbar 24 July 2006

the fart button...funny...i know you made up the rest of the poem! ! ...loved it...nalini

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Preeti - is here! 24 July 2006

Haha..the fart button...nice concept...funny ending! yes.. we all run to our computers.....we are almost married to them *wink* Preets

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linda...are we just a might miffed here ? Or just a mighty witty Poet? i'll go with choice B, , , Final Answer'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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Con Nie 23 July 2006

Hi Linda, Interesting poem. Funny last verse. Yes, these days of the computer actually can help many people. So nice how you can just talk to people instantly and though you may not know them in person, they understand the human condition. :) Take care. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Anna Russell 23 July 2006

Hee hee. Oh that fart button is annoying isn't it? But I think most of us here can relate to your words Linda. Hugs Anna xxx

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