Monday, May 12, 2008

Cyber Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

During discussion with key-board
through internet messenger,
Love sleeps on the bench like a pet
beside the purple-green footpath.
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Ashraful Musaddeq
COMMENTS
Pandian Angelina 05 September 2009

Hi, How nicely you have depicted cyber love, accepting it with a grace and not condemning it like most do for its shallowness. Maybe you depict the shallowness when you say it is just like a pet and kite flying things done for a short time and then forgotten. Your poem, Ashraf, is another painting as beautiful as ever a summers day at the park with a clear sky. Angel.

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Hon’ble Poet, Excellent write up. Relevant for new ages. And a Ten. Incidentally similar poem you’ll find ‘Lip Lock Rendezvous’ kindly put your valuable opinion and vote if worthy of. Regards, dr. sakti 14.08.09.

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Sílvia Oliveira 26 May 2009

Dear Ashraful, Mine are Linda´s and Hema´s words about your 'Cyber Love' - it really deserves a 10! Congrats from Brazil, Sílvia P.S. Thanks for your comments on my hai ku - it´s meaninul to me!

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Linda Ori 23 May 2009

So, that's how it works! I love this poem - filled with beautiful imagery and lovely descriptive detail. Cyberlove can be very rewarding, although not as good as the real thing. Some can speak their true feelings without risking personal involvement. Nicely done! Linda :)

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Malini Kadir 23 May 2009

Love sleeps in the bench like a pet.......you put it very uniquely! High end world well described.... Dreamy quest.....for jaded dreams

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 21 May 2009

Hi, it's great to dive through 'cyber' to 'love', both are full imagination and you suceed to intertwined it as a fact of act which many had experiences. Tks for sharing these interesting line.

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T S 17 May 2009

Cyber love..... Virtual Love....... verus real Love, I know whic one I prefer. Exquisite write 10 plus

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Darren Koh 17 May 2009

nice poem. special bout cyber love.very unique. rated it 10.

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Anjali Sinha 01 May 2009

introspection is needed here do we proceed or do we stop so many friends here dont know whom to choose but then, lets be happy cos God has created us only for love -10 anjali

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Edna Javelosa 25 April 2009

nice write..many a friends i knew met the loves of their lives through the internet and are very much happily married until now..

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 21 April 2009

And this story took strange course The cyber love ended in a cyber divorce...............Good Write, , , , , , , , , ,

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 19 April 2009

you wrote it so vividly and beautifully.. great job my good friend! amazing

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Lynda Robson 10 October 2008

Very interesting poem on modern day living, a lot of people meet today through the internet, your poem is so true, 10 Lynda xx

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Gargi Saha 06 October 2008

A lovely poem on love something new. U get 10++

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 29 September 2008

Got some food for thought...very true indeed....Thanks

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Reshma Ramesh 25 September 2008

lol.......very nice indeed

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Golnoosh Nourpanah 24 September 2008

Hey it was cool & very true!

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Janua Catt Alonzo 22 September 2008

this is so true... ;)

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Blue Eyes 21 September 2008

i love the similes u used

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 20 September 2008

Nice consolation for those millions out there doing exactly as this poem describes.

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