During discussion with key-board
through internet messenger,
Love sleeps on the bench like a pet
beside the purple-green footpath.
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Hon’ble Poet, Excellent write up. Relevant for new ages. And a Ten. Incidentally similar poem you’ll find ‘Lip Lock Rendezvous’ kindly put your valuable opinion and vote if worthy of. Regards, dr. sakti 14.08.09.
Dear Ashraful, Mine are Linda´s and Hema´s words about your 'Cyber Love' - it really deserves a 10! Congrats from Brazil, Sílvia P.S. Thanks for your comments on my hai ku - it´s meaninul to me!
So, that's how it works! I love this poem - filled with beautiful imagery and lovely descriptive detail. Cyberlove can be very rewarding, although not as good as the real thing. Some can speak their true feelings without risking personal involvement. Nicely done! Linda :)
Love sleeps in the bench like a pet.......you put it very uniquely! High end world well described.... Dreamy quest.....for jaded dreams
Hi, it's great to dive through 'cyber' to 'love', both are full imagination and you suceed to intertwined it as a fact of act which many had experiences. Tks for sharing these interesting line.
Cyber love..... Virtual Love....... verus real Love, I know whic one I prefer. Exquisite write 10 plus
introspection is needed here do we proceed or do we stop so many friends here dont know whom to choose but then, lets be happy cos God has created us only for love -10 anjali
nice write..many a friends i knew met the loves of their lives through the internet and are very much happily married until now..
And this story took strange course The cyber love ended in a cyber divorce...............Good Write, , , , , , , , , ,
you wrote it so vividly and beautifully.. great job my good friend! amazing
Very interesting poem on modern day living, a lot of people meet today through the internet, your poem is so true, 10 Lynda xx
Got some food for thought...very true indeed....Thanks
Nice consolation for those millions out there doing exactly as this poem describes.
Hi, How nicely you have depicted cyber love, accepting it with a grace and not condemning it like most do for its shallowness. Maybe you depict the shallowness when you say it is just like a pet and kite flying things done for a short time and then forgotten. Your poem, Ashraf, is another painting as beautiful as ever a summers day at the park with a clear sky. Angel.