Thursday, February 19, 2009

Cyanotic Lips (For My Blueberrygirl) Comments

Rating: 5.0

So will you walk with me,
I know the paths
that lead into the dark
and wondrous shadows
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Fay Slimm 19 February 2009

Full of adventure and tender invitation - - it literally swings when being read aloud - - and the whole gels into romantic line par exellence. a sure 10 from Fay...

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Cherry Sha 19 February 2009

what an amazing plan.... beautiful.

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Kris Smith 19 February 2009

Wonderful write H had me fron start to finish 10 ++++ Chris

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Fiona Davidson 19 February 2009

Beatiful poem Herbert....(would you like an oxygen tank lol) ....thank you...Fi 10+++

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