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A flame of gold
She was
Beneath my finger tips.
Skin richer than velvet
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Mary Ali
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 12 July 2009

Nice poem, Mary, but as you said ' Every sweet thing has a bitter end'. She was certainly insincere in displaying her affection. Though a peaceful tragedy should be understood as nature's play and correlated with the facts of life. Best Wishes Naseer

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Mary Ali

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