Wednesday, March 21, 2012

Cuz I Believe Comments

Rating: 3.2

I won't let go, I won't leave,
I'll hold on cuz i believe.
When i'm faced by a stormy and cold night,
a candle of faith in my heart i'll light.
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tanvi damle
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Leah Ayliffe 28 October 2012

Lovely poem full of dreams, hope & magic!

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Your poetic talent has rightly been revealed here and the power of imagination sans any hypocrisy is obviously good to feel..

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Jake Young 19 April 2012

its a really good poem. im glad you showed it to me. one of the best i've seen on here.

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Parithi Muthurasan 12 April 2012

When i'm faced by a stormy and cold night, a candle of faith in my heart i'll light...........very thoughtful line

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Vassilis Comporozos 01 April 2012

Me, again! I'll try to read more poems of yours at night, since I have to do some other things now that my two kids are sleeping.

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Vassilis Comporozos 01 April 2012

I really liked this one! A poem, a song to be set to music, and wonderful denotations and connotations, too

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Pranab K Chakraborty 29 March 2012

Poet has enlisted some commitments which she wants to maintain by herself. Nice. Try to follow this manifesto at least to your own life. Thank you for invitation.

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Neela Nath Das 25 March 2012

Very beautiful poem indeed.

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Parithi Muthurasan 23 March 2012

I'll catch a falling star, put it in my pocket and carry it along the way, -A VERY NICE LINE, EXPOSE UR IMAGINATION

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nice one...but there's a line which isn't good enuf..i guess which one i'm talking about. :)

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Lakshay Gaba 21 March 2012

its really good dear.....

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Jose Guevara 21 March 2012

A poem that was fun to read. It must be exciting to think about what else the journey of life has for you. Good travels!

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Shahzia Batool 21 March 2012

Like Hemingway's The Sun Also Rises, you have given a novelty to the age-old universal phenomenon: cuz then in case the sun forgets to shine... you speak in your writing...it's different... :)

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Amy Marie 21 March 2012

A nice message about believing :)

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Kumar Parashar 21 March 2012

loved the poem..especially cuz then incase the sun forgets to shine, i'll still have this twinkling light to help me make it through the day.. great work tanvi

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 March 2012

very nice.there is love and hope in the ink.keep inking.

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Alex Medvedev 21 March 2012

so inspirational! keep going, mate!

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Chitra - 21 March 2012

full of optimism....a great poem of hope...hope-giving to others!

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Aman Sa 21 March 2012

Good poem, given your age you have potential is what i can say without a single thought. The lines however seem to have a vague connection to a hillary duff song, , keep writing and be creative :)

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Eric Cockrell 21 March 2012

great attitude! ... you will go far!

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