I won't let go, I won't leave,
I'll hold on cuz i believe.
When i'm faced by a stormy and cold night,
a candle of faith in my heart i'll light.
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Your poetic talent has rightly been revealed here and the power of imagination sans any hypocrisy is obviously good to feel..
its a really good poem. im glad you showed it to me. one of the best i've seen on here.
When i'm faced by a stormy and cold night, a candle of faith in my heart i'll light...........very thoughtful line
Me, again! I'll try to read more poems of yours at night, since I have to do some other things now that my two kids are sleeping.
I really liked this one! A poem, a song to be set to music, and wonderful denotations and connotations, too
Poet has enlisted some commitments which she wants to maintain by herself. Nice. Try to follow this manifesto at least to your own life. Thank you for invitation.
I'll catch a falling star, put it in my pocket and carry it along the way, -A VERY NICE LINE, EXPOSE UR IMAGINATION
nice one...but there's a line which isn't good enuf..i guess which one i'm talking about. :)
A poem that was fun to read. It must be exciting to think about what else the journey of life has for you. Good travels!
Like Hemingway's The Sun Also Rises, you have given a novelty to the age-old universal phenomenon: cuz then in case the sun forgets to shine... you speak in your writing...it's different... :)
loved the poem..especially cuz then incase the sun forgets to shine, i'll still have this twinkling light to help me make it through the day.. great work tanvi
Good poem, given your age you have potential is what i can say without a single thought. The lines however seem to have a vague connection to a hillary duff song, , keep writing and be creative :)
Lovely poem full of dreams, hope & magic!