Cutting Up Your Precious Petrol Supply Comments

The title says much. A poem which connected very strongly with me. The metaphor is very original. A prophetic piece, and you do well to wait. I admire this very much.

Truth will out.love Duncan

Lots of passion and conviction here, Ivy! Almost one continuous thought with strong visuals...nice!

I liked your really powerful tone in this poem. It is very definite and certain. I agree with Andrew that the 'One/ by/ one' worked very effectively and the ending, well, spot on. Perfectly said. The deception will come to an end. I see a great development in your work Ivy. Can't wait to read more, as usual! All the best, your friend, Seán

I appreciate your intensity of passion in this one.