Sunday, June 28, 2009

Cutting Comments

Rating: 5.0

i like the pain,
i like the blood,
i love the scars,
when will someone help stop this curse?
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Alicia Roseberry
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It's addicting, yes. Sorrow, morbidity, strange bliss. I'm sorry bout whatever drove you to this. I know what it's like. I hope things are looking better for you.

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Hiding Nothing 22 July 2009

Though this poem is good and great technique and style are used.. it is not to my liking..it makes me feel depressed and brings up painful memories

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rago rago 28 June 2009

alicia roseberry...... thorn to someone...... yu are certainly thorn in writing...... do not cut how many pieces you are going to........ cutting will not end the pain if so let many of us cut....... the poem is too good.......

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your skin is beautiful your body is too no more cute not one slice and yes, not two. please no more your life you pour wasting its measure closing your soul's door.

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Alicia Roseberry

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