Thursday, June 25, 2009
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i never realised what was happening
i never saw the tell tale signs
the thoughts of death welled up inside me
as the blood came pouring down
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Sayz LFlynn
25 June 2009
quite a touching poem, love the way its writen and the metapher 'as a river' a 10 from me...
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8/1/2025 3:43:57 AM # 1.0.0
My Dear Friend A poem should be a source of pleasure or as an ambition, dont show a wrong path to the readers. Your poem, interms of the quolity, it is good and got a nice flow. Best of Luck Regards, nooruddeen