Go To Sleep And Close Yuur Eyes.
And Dream Of Broken Butterflies; ;
That Tore Their Wings Against AThorn.
Yuu Know The Pain That They Have Endured!
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this poem is.....i cant describe how true this poem is, u have written this more beautifully than even i could have...please keep writing and continue to make ur poetry vivid. i LOVED it
this is my favorite poem i think. out of all that i have read. i like this one the most. keep writing. take care.
Naaawwwwwwww Kaila... I'm sorry fings r still crappy 4 u. Just remember that I'm here n u have my numbers if u ever need 2 talk... I'm here for u. Beautiful poem though. It was excellent. A Lullaby with an awsome twist. Keep writing: -) Love Rissa xXx oOo
Sorry i had to comment twice...this is a really good poem, worth reading more than once.
Damn i had an idea like this but you did it so much better, great poem, actually...a perfect poem.
i have SI too and there are a million times i feel exactly the same...jus hold on, believe it or not, it gets better eventually (i'm still waiting for that 'eventually' to come abt) take care, sam
loved this poem so so so much ur so good my little friend lol