Go to sleep and close your eyes,
And dream of broken butterflies
That tore their wings against a thorn.
You know the pain that they have endured
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this poem is not by neyri Castaneda this poem is by Jaime Moskowitz she wrote it a few years back and it became a big hit it is very disappointing that someone would try to take their work and say it was theirs.
Wow! ! Hey, may I please use this poem in the novel I'm writing, citing you of course? :)
i really really love this poem with all my heart. it trully is amazing, i dont think you should or anyone else should put such wonderfull work on the web, for someone will claim their work. this poem for instance my friend dakota said he wrote. i hate his for lying, , , i will correct him, no one should take other peoples work!
Simply and definitely great. I love how this flowed and it had a really cool theme. Loved it!
wow.....thats all i can say...and thats a good thing. lol. excellent. this is my favorite so far.
i completely relate, i thought it was beautiful especialy with it addressing all the emotions accompaning cutting