Thursday, July 2, 2015

Cuts And Slash For Words! Comments

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The rain dashes down with a great splash
It falls upon whom it chooses to wash

The wise sees a rain cloud and to a shelter dash
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Clarence Prince
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 July 2015

Wow awesome rhyming word choice and unique take on the rain. Poetic word splashes al over making for a fantastic poem indeed. U wrote it in a super way and I like the reality touches in it. Kudos.. Pls do review my latest poem too titled titled Tanzania.

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Valsa George 22 July 2015

Like the rain splashing down without waiting for anybody's bidding, poems are created by the poet at will without caring if they produce smile or scorn. As the sky cannot contain rain clouds without letting them fall down in the form of rain drops, a poet when filled with imagination let it to be poured into paper in the form of verse! Reading this poem, I felt getting wet on a sunny day in a drizzle! Thanks!

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Darlene Walsh 22 July 2015

I also like to read poems and to write poems 'Whoever fines time to read and laugh' and I have enjoyed reading your poems.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 July 2015

Very aptly envisioned using nicely the words splash, dash, wash, trash, brash, flash etc. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Gladys Brown Prince 15 July 2015

Even so, a poet writes, we read and laugh That's so very true. Well done be blessed.

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A real poetry bash! Flashing words in splash! At the end a lot of laugh! Good one, Sir.

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