Tuesday, January 31, 2012

Cute Girl Comments

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You may change my world with a blink of an eye,
That is something that I cannot deny,
You put my soul from worst to best,
That is why I treasure you my dearest Marites.
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Lawrence Hiung
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Patricia Grantham 04 April 2014

Definitely a cute poem. Sentiments expressed so soft and sweet. Good rhyming scheme Lawrence!

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Valerie Dohren 27 February 2012

A really great love poem - well rhymed and a joy to read.

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Lawrence H 31 January 2012

This is the most beautiful and melodious poem I ever read and also what a lovely and touching love poem by anonymous author. I respect this poet who can composed so beautiful and good rhyme in this poem. I just fall in love with this poem when you read it aloud and many times to your loved ones.

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Lawrence Hiung

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