Wednesday, December 24, 2014

Cut The Ribbon, Pull The Bow Comments

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Cut the ribbons, pull the bow
We've got sun, we hate snow!

SATAN Claus will come tonight
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Neela Nath Das 25 December 2014

Sarcastic and Yummy poem.I want to laugh Ha ha ha.Great N.B.

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Robert Plese 24 December 2014

I appreciate the first verse. I would omit the word the in...we hate the snow. As it does not add to the meaning and takes away from the flow.

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