Monday, November 4, 2013

Cut Off! Comments

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A cut off I feel from everyone.
May be I don't want to listen.
May be I don't want to see.
May be I don't want to hear.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 September 2014

Feelings so well expressed though a negative one can be overcome with positive thoughts......Geetha.......... well penned a poignant one.....

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Lyn Paul 30 November 2013

You have expressed this cut off well, this poem would be for us all.

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Valsa George 22 November 2013

Our moods cannot be steady all the time! Sometimes, there comes an urge to withdraw form eveything and everyone! I feel this is only a fleeting phase! This dullness is not cosistent with your boisterous spirits, Geetha! A poignant write!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 November 2013

emotional tip to toe beautifully arranged thank you

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Suman Kumar Das 11 November 2013

beautiful poem! i like it...... Thanks

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Kanav Justa 10 November 2013

... nice one.. enjoyed it

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David Wood 09 November 2013

It sounds like a bad hair day to me. We all have to withdraw from life from time to time. Good poem though.

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Marvin Brato 07 November 2013

It alright to cut off from the world sometimes, it will allow self reflection mood!

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Sometimes it is good to be a cut off Live briefly in darkness and silence Then rebound at critics to scoff With greater creativity's essence........ Good poem and keep writing............

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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