Friday, December 18, 2009

Cut Me Up Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take a knife and cut me up
If you hate me you wont stop
Make me feel the pain within
As your slitting through my
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CourtneyJae noggle 12 November 2010

It's really deep and i love it and the rythm sceem is so goos and it makes sence

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Chris Argumenti 28 July 2010

looks like my brother still got it

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Kieran J96 24 May 2010

this is amazing piece of writing. will u read some of my dark poems. really good work, well done

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this is great. creepy but in a good way. I like the way you put words together to make your message clear. I AM FOREVER JEALOUS OF YOUR POETRY! ! ! this is being favorited.

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Kerry green evil becomes her 09 February 2010

i love your poem i love dark poetry i write it my self have a look at im in control my new poem tel me what you think

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Miranda Will 05 February 2010

Thats Really Deep! I Love that you can express your self this way, its a good stress reliever.

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Iron Panda 23™ 08 January 2010

: o soo friffin deep! ! ......LOVE it! ! !

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