Sunday, February 22, 2009

Cut Again Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sitting alone in my room once again
Thinking of how terrible this day has been
Looking around, about to go insane
I see something that will ease the pain
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Jeffrey Taylor
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Chelsea Moffitt 22 February 2009

This hits home for me. I think this poem is really well written. You managed to get lost in it and also explain it in such a clear way all at the same time. 'When covering my pain is hard enough'.....this is all too true. I cant wait to read more of your work!

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Catrina Heart 22 February 2009

poignant composition.......interesting write...10+++++

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Jeffrey Taylor

Jeffrey Taylor

Staunton, Virginia
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