Saturday, December 29, 2012

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Im in the zone its time to get lazy
Nobody can save me slump as a rock
Stuck to the bed nobody can stop me
Thoughts going crazy in the land of nod
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Arron Fowler
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C N Prem Kumar 09 January 2013

Good poem with a touch of laziness. The theme and style really merge well.

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Arron Fowler 03 January 2013

cheers for advice sun princess i tend to use a lot of slang which needs to stop

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Dawn Lambert 02 January 2013

it's great to describe the love for your bed but it's better without any coding just s saying....

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