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Had a free second so just dropped by for a second reading. Second thoughts: Perhaps you have same set of time-conditions so ask your computer for an astonishing amount of help; as Bhagwan Rajneesh often said: 'hmmm? '

The curves of meaning lead to delusion only because man looks in the wrong place. The rise and fall of the earth is the cry of the earth for renewal, for not all life is full of joy since man chose wickedness and passed it on to all his children. But God in heaven reaches down to earth in love, to see if we choose to be reconciled. This poem is rich in words, like a meal made well, yet lacks unity. In some phrases the meaning is lost Thank you for writing what you see.

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

In poems of metaphorical magnitude such as yours, some words stand out as needing exactitude in their spelling in order to assure a reader of what the author had in mind. In this philosophical poem I am not sure of the word 'though' in the first sentence and my old dictionary does not have the word 'flornce' in it. Though I like the general tenor of the poem, even were I clever enough, which is doubtful, I cannot arrive at a meaning that covers the whole import of this poem. I would prefer to but simply cannot. I may be obtuse in this but I thought I would bring it to your notice as it may, as I think it is, or may not, be cogent to the imagery. Enjoyed, anyway.

'evrything earthly has its own rise and fall' what a statement, and a very true one at that......

wow! great one. the depth it reaches is really far beyond... writen with eloquent words.10.

striking and devotional... From dawn to dusk and beyond we do have own dreams...yes we do dream and that made us alive.

suhendu, you have elogquently penned a poem that touches topics that all of us in time reflect upon in different times in our lives. Time and our own moratlity, and what we do with the time that we have and does any of it have true meaning. we all wonder if we have lived our lives accordingly so that at the end of our days we have left behind an uncompromised legecy, not only of ourselves but also to those we have taught and left behind. beautifly written and very imaginative. i again applaud your mastery of writing. Jen

love it aloooot. it has a meaning and full of imagery. (and that what i like in poetry) ... well written..! go on writing...

From dawn to dusk and beyond we do have own dreams Rachel Ann Butler

Full of vivid images. Rich imagery.

Very meaningful poem. Well penned Enjoyed reading it

time reels moments pass morning goes evening dawns and life goes on lovely poem dear Shub surely a tenner from me anjali

very fine poem i liked it read it many times10+++

Philosophy, imagery and diction masterly weaved impacting one to search the soul

Everything earthy has its own rise and fall... a wonderful thought captured so beautifully.. thanks.. :)

A reflective and masterful expression of truth and the circular nature of life where time and place are as elusive as thistledown. Your poem is eloquent. Your wisdom is beyond words. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

wonderful poem with deep meaning

curves of meaning never crunch into fear of reality or religion as genuflection of dew retiring over grass blade to golden rays for sun wakening into redemption, Dear poet friend, Your poem is full of thought And images resounding Like waves upon soul's shore Carrying subtle meanings From deep within the soul Which has plunged deeper Into a process of thought Deeper than a Ocean's heart! I echo the sentiments of our friend Mamta mam' who has said it all.

Abstract poetry coming from deep thought and unreleased emotion flowing free.