Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Curved Eyelash Comments

Rating: 5.0

I could feel the vibration of your screams in the air.
'Twas in a curve of the time.
Your sight was in touch with this vibration.
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Marieta Maglas
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Ahyela Andojar 05 October 2010

this poem depicts the real feeling of having our eyelash curved...a moment of awakening, a sign of happiness... brings joy to whom ever our eyes would set in. nice words, nice flow

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 January 2010

you got it... it is a very good poem

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C. P. Sharma 11 January 2010

A lovely poem transporting from sensuousness to super-consciousness. CP

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Marieta Maglas 06 January 2010

From: Randy Winehouse (South Africa ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 1/6/2010 2: 38: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: curved eyelash A divinity that holds curves of time.I love it. Randy

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 January 2010

Hey Dear Poet lend me your poetic imagination…please please... Imagery has come live and alive…palpable and pulsatile… I can ‘listen’ the subsubtle quiver of Curved Eyelash... Exquisite read for me on 1 January 1,2010 and poetically I’m filled up and flying… Flying 10+++ Ms. Nivedita UK Added as my fav. poem

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Marieta Maglas 16 December 2009

Love would become an unstable point of equilibrium... 10

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Kesav Easwaran 08 December 2009

This poem i feel, must be read along with your poem- 'Flight'...much connection i notice...the curve and the air are the poetic tools in this poem...rainbow and flight in the other... Apart from a curved eye brow, the caption curved eye-lash takes the poem to a mystic surreal level...the theme underlying i feel is the hopes in life...and the uncertainty of the latter...10

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Marieta Maglas 28 November 2009

From: T. Q. Sims (New Orleans, LA United States; Male; 31) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/27/2009 5: 43: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) i also really liked 'curved eyelash.' the title mad me curious-really great poem too. ~t.q. sims

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Beatriz Hutton 18 November 2009

I like it a lot :) Keep it up! 10

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Lyssa Haley 18 November 2009

you leave me no option but to vote this incredible poem 10

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Simon Morrison 18 November 2009

Would be touched By your sight, By curving the time Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem 10

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Richard Breslin 18 November 2009

i love your words of love. thanks again. 10

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Jeremy Wright 18 November 2009

your poem holds my breath in awe! thanks for sharing 10

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Afzal Shauq 10 November 2009

sweet poem for the one who stay inside you.. your imagination for him or her is wonderful, he is not before your eyes..but you skectk his face and feel that the air which is touching his body smells you his presence.. mtaphore.. pictographic effects are found in this poem.. but again in deep conceiving style of romance.. your poems are like melodies of love..life and like the fantasies that you mix with your love feelings for unknown but IDEAL of oepne eyes dreams.. really a good poem..10/10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 November 2009

The air would assemble in a gray cloud, By wrapping your insular thought The thought inside the glided silence To the autumnal leaves. I couldn’t keep that second anymore. The second glided between my fingers....what an imagination of beloved... i liked the idea so much and may cherish for longer period...i loved it and taking as poet's gift....10

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Margaret Donaghy 30 October 2009

I couldn’t keep that second anymore. The second glided between my fingers My praying fingers. The horizon of the sea Notch corals and shells In the horizon of the eye, In offing. It seems to prepare The awake of the shiver, For being revived 10

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Abigail Roscoe 30 September 2009

nice poem...good job............

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Gershon Hepner 05 August 2009

Curves leading to an unstable equilbrium-fantastic metaphot=r. It leads to many tangents that I could mention, but I prefer to leave the poem untouched, since it is perfect.

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'The vibration of the air, Around you Would be touched By your sight, By curving the time.' Really your poems deserve to be read many times. They have a poetic taste. And they reveal the unseen, and the unwritten.10.

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Rhiley Anne Vincent 08 June 2009

I love the way it gows from a tiny speck in the eye till it engulfs the hole person. It flows and grows. Truly great!

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