Saturday, January 17, 2009

Curtains Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her eyes closed
The pain shut out
Tear traced from a single memory
Seen behind closed curtains
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Cena Rose
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Sameer Ahmed 31 January 2009

Very heartfelf poem with some good melancholic emotions in its essence...........Tears behind curtains.........makes us even more stronger.............10/10

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Catrina Heart 29 January 2009

Tear traced from a single memory Seen behind closed curtains ----- fine lines here Cena...a poignant composition penned so heartfelt... Tears behind closed curtains because people try to hide the tears for them to look fine, strong and unaffected.........10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 January 2009

Tears of innerself....... Dreams are more real than actual life, a beautiful concept painful though....... Keep it up, Cena. Best Wishes. Naseer

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<font color=black>Nagourta 25 January 2009

'One who lets the world drain their inner creativity will become one of them.' -Nagourta

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