Wednesday, July 16, 2008

Curtains... Comments

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Evening raises the curtain
from the waning horizon,
dusk tip-toes on the moss of darkness
casting solitary shadows
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Bharat Trivedi
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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 July 2008

yet the evening whispers to rave up acroos the gleams of nature scintillating the dream come to the home of hope luscious green yet intones burning brilliant.....................wonderful scape of dream, the passion bestires by the glimpse of blue, ingenious by the grin, well penned,10+ thanks for sharing

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Sathyanarayana M V S 27 July 2008

Your descriptions are exceptional and the tempo is well maintained throughout the poem so nicely. sathya narayana

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