Monday, November 2, 2009

Cursing Myself Comments

Rating: 4.0

The winds blow rather rush away,
Follow a path, or the blind man’s way.
Somebody go and stop it at least
Before it’s over and flown at ease.
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Aditya Pathak 'particle'
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Brishti Mazumdar 08 November 2009

Time rolls and memories fade on the way But the wounds by love are never away…. ...so true....and so nicely composed....well done, Aditya....10

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Parth Arora 04 November 2009

bhai, , i shud say that there is a serious problem, , , although the poem is awesome, , as always.... but u know i hav a feelin that u've had a break up or sumthing this mite be the reason y u r writing in ths dejected way, , , melancholic pensive xpresions of a person just got through frm a break up...

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Aashka Thakkar 02 November 2009

Hey ADI that's AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! I should say u r a gr8 writer.

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