Curses In Old Age Comments
During my school days it used to be Commander Mary
Who owned me like her Private and made me merry
When her rule became oppressive and results depressive
I decamped from her regime and jumped from her ferry
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Old Age? You're still a younster! lol! They say your biography becomes your biology, so careful how you sow those wild oats! Just like sports injuries, they'll jump up and grab you when you're older. Great write! Linfda
A broadly unique penning, indeed....interesting variable Rhyme pattern, and quite the innovative flair for subjext matter & your gift to paint a story true! Fine Work. fjr
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