Friday, November 4, 2005

Cursed Shame Reviewed Comments

Rating: 4.5

Shame, that cursed killing shame,
cascading into flooding tears.
Feelings, is it me to blame?
Shame, the knife that cuts, that sears.
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Susan Alldred Lugton
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Simon Whild 04 November 2005

A nice flow that belies the poem's message and creates a feel of unease. I liked it.

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Liz Munro 04 November 2005

Love the rhyme and flow of this. Nice work Susan. Added to faves. Liz.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 04 November 2005

very nicely described.

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Susan Alldred Lugton

Susan Alldred Lugton

Dunedin New Zealand
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