Tuesday, February 6, 2018

Cursed Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

From riches to rags
he was forced by life's tags,
His very own, falling into life's dirty flow,
turned unknown...
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Jaishree Nair
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Unnikrishnan E S 08 February 2018

Hi Jaisree, A very well written poem, exuding the emotional turmoil fully; the lament, the remorse. But brevity is your hallmark- just stops short of narrating how he lost everything, leaving it for the read to guess. The poem concentrates on the emotional outpour. Very, very heart-rending. A 100++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 February 2018

Jaishree, such a well penned poem👍

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