Hi Jaisree,
A very well written poem, exuding the emotional turmoil fully; the lament, the remorse. But brevity is your hallmark- just stops short of narrating how he lost everything, leaving it for the read to guess. The poem concentrates on the emotional outpour. Very, very heart-rending. A 100++
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Hi Jaisree, A very well written poem, exuding the emotional turmoil fully; the lament, the remorse. But brevity is your hallmark- just stops short of narrating how he lost everything, leaving it for the read to guess. The poem concentrates on the emotional outpour. Very, very heart-rending. A 100++