She, dark, sleek, beautiful, vigilant, cautious, cold,
sensual, silently slithering through the brush
as if in deep trance...
listening with each fiver, trusting nothing but
...
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What a beautiful piece. Such narrative strength, and every line and word serves an exceptional purpose to the overall piece! Love the end too, So take upon your head the hate, the scorn and live your karma in this garden of souls until your last day upon this earth, serves as a kind of lesson for us to live by! excellent :)
Fantastic poem! I'm a snake fan too!
Sorry I put you through this, but I'm glad you read it. I'm a snake fan too. Thank you for reading and nice comment.