Monday, August 22, 2016

Cursed In The Garden Comments

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She, dark, sleek, beautiful, vigilant, cautious, cold,
sensual, silently slithering through the brush
as if in deep trance...
listening with each fiver, trusting nothing but
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Kostas Lagos 28 May 2019

Fantastic poem! I'm a snake fan too!

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Luz Hanaii 28 May 2019

Sorry I put you through this, but I'm glad you read it. I'm a snake fan too. Thank you for reading and nice comment.

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Zachary Edmond Lockhart 19 January 2017

What a beautiful piece. Such narrative strength, and every line and word serves an exceptional purpose to the overall piece! Love the end too, So take upon your head the hate, the scorn and live your karma in this garden of souls until your last day upon this earth, serves as a kind of lesson for us to live by! excellent :)

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Luz Hanaii 19 January 2017

Thank you for reading and nice comment.

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Kelly Kurt 29 August 2016

A wise and insightful poem, Luz. Nicely written

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Luz Hanaii 19 January 2017

Thank you, sorry for late response.

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