Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Cursed Comments

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Why cant i do anything right,
I hurt so bad i cry myself to sleep everynight.
In a relationship, friends or at home,
In the end i always feel im alone.
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Karissa Earley
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Milica Franchi De Luri 09 September 2009

Hi Carissa ....... i like your poem.You have a talent for writing, you express well, you have rhythmic balance in the stanzas, nice rhymes as well. Bad relationships put damper on the good intentions we had when we got into that relationship. You are not cursed, just need to make different choices. all the best milica (if time permits read my poem 'my heart)

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Karissa Earley

Karissa Earley

cambridge ohio
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