Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Cursed Comments

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Listen to this fable
And see if it rhymes
The foolish donkey
Is pulling a cart
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Djinnga Fairbairn 19 August 2009

the words and images flow...the feeling strong, the disappointment evident....liked it bella...very descriptive the journey leading to present path...let me add the 'never give up' as a final touch...thoughts and smiles (will not rate it...how can you rate the heart?)

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