Monday, August 10, 2009

Cursed Comments

Rating: 5.0

She told me all her pain
I looked at her dismal face and said
It’s alright honey!
You are not the only one
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Lady Grace 21 August 2009

good theme..''cursed by master of all? '..hmmm, i guess it needs detail..

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Anjali Sinha 12 August 2009

good write but i wont say 'cursed by the master of all' -10 anjali

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Rehana Nazli 11 August 2009

With your truthful mind and sincere heart When I am being cursed by the Master of all A beautiful example of the theme of displacement of emotions. In the begining it felt patronising, e.g; It’s alright honey! You are not the only one.........

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Brilliant work Dr. Kamran. 'A crack in the mind of a genius, a hole in the heart of a lover, a veil in the eyes of a painter and a lock on the eyes of an orator. Some people think they are cursed, but often need help to break the curse! Top marks. Karin Anderson

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Vaibhav Pandey 10 August 2009

an excellent write....worth cogitating...10

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Indira Babbellapati 10 August 2009

yet another illusion we all live in...that we are cursed! it's all a process beyond our comprehension, isn't it?

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