Friday, November 6, 2009

Curse Of The Verse Comments

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The other day
while I was walkin,
it dawned on me
in verse I’m talkin!
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Once upon a toilet wall
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Patti Masterman 06 November 2009

I'm guessing..your next poem will be the non rhyming one? lol

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Patti Masterman 06 November 2009

Scary isn't it? When you hear yourself still rhyming when going to sleep, and you send someone a message and they reply, you never answered my question and your message sounds like a poem..(smile)

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Catrina Heart 06 November 2009

nice poem shared...poems that rhymes or not is still a great wonderful art, as long as it is free flowing verses that come from the heart of the poet.............. on the toilet wall, etched the pinning dreams the craving shower of balloons and strings flashed stinky creams with cleansers.........

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