Curse Comments

The description of the legless king living in a cave, destined to crawl is indeed frightening....! (I am terribly afraid of snakes and the very thought of King cobra sends shudders through my nerves!) Vipins, you have beautifully given a mythical connotation to it!

Very beautifully prescribed your sentiments and feelings thank for sharing with me

Profound sentiments about lowly being cursed! Thanks for sharing.

Brilliantly told, original and interesting write...well done -SG

'Fang of sceptre'- wow, how imaginative!

You always present an interesting tale within your poetry, and for this, I thank you. Wonderfully narrated.

Another brilliant idea, you creatively making a spiral story, curl and beautiful and challenging, interesting than plain straight poetry...After few days you refill the ink in your hand and i am proud, the writing look so cool here...Keep more to come, cheers! _Unwritten Soul

Narration of the beast that live never less than supreme ruler... fight and bite made the commoner understand the truth about surviving as a king. Human or beast; our nature almost alike! ! ! ! Excellent poem and keep writing! ! ! !