Thursday, July 30, 2009

Curse Comments

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Everything I believed in and wanted
Worked for and prayed
Is now all lies and mistakes
My golden truth, rotted and lays decayed
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Deborah Cromer
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Louis Rams 02 August 2009

when you get hurt by someone that you have learned to trust and love and then you seek relief from the one from above, for he will always show you that in this world you still have a chance to find a greater love, and love divine.

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Ashley Mejia 02 August 2009

wow sad yet pretty at the same time. nice job

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Christina Phan 02 August 2009

i know how u feel, i hate it so much, it never go away 10+++ fanastic job

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 01 August 2009

this poem is overloaded with melancholy, yet the flow is good and is nice to read

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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