He kissed me
as if he was drowning
and I was his oxygen
caught in the currents of passion
wave after wave
he swam in my love
until he was saved
Lion and Tigress series
Copyright @ Aqua Flower
This is really good! I can only second what Mohammed and Savita have said. A 10
Power of love. A passionate poem nicely written. Loved it 10+++
Thank you to a poet who's visiting the poem and enjoying it I appreciate your comments.
Love it Aqua Flower. This little poem so pleasant to read. Drowns in essence of pure love! Thanks for sharing.
Hello Savita. So glad you loved it. Thank you for your comment! Have a wonderful day!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Passion flows through the lines of your poetry like the streams cascading down a hill at will. Loved your poem, loved your style.
My reply to your comment has typos because I use my cell phone which is very tiny and when I dictate instead of using my fingers it sometimes changes my words. Thank you my friend for your comments. My last comment was supposed to say your name instead of the word cover. LOL.
Thank you cover for visiting this love poem. Writing love poems is one of my favorite topics. Your comments are much appreciated!