Curly hair,
Not a care.
Falls asleep
At Daddy's feet
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I have this wonderful picture of a sweet baby girl with curly hair, sucking thumb and the innocence of the young. Wondefully written Practicing Poetess!
Very nice poem with Teddy Bear, batteries, and curls included. QtR
'Off to bed, Sleepy head. Bright moon beams, Pleasant dreams.' - The poem ends so beautifully! Thanks for the 'Poet's Notes'. 'My objective was to paint a descriptive picture in as few words as possible' - you have been quite successful in doing that, you have achieved your objective.
A well written poem. Truly delightful—- 5 stars*****
Thank you for your appreciation, Bernard!