Monday, November 13, 2006

.curling Respires (Couplets) Comments

Rating: 3.4

Wispy calligraphy draws me into
The wintered blue that eyes and so lightly

Veils her shoulders in fine–twigged taupe lace
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Debora Short
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Almost surreal, and one of the most atmospheric pieces I have ever had the pleasure of reading... unique and marvellous. t x

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Will Barber 13 November 2006

Lovely write. Very, very original and evocative.

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Sean North 13 November 2006

and just one more....tHiS JuSt rOcKs.....DEBORA... Brilliantly done

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Sean North 13 November 2006

still mostly SpEeChLESs.....................

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Sean North 13 November 2006

how maNy 10's can one man GiVe? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? LuVLy StUfF Debora...dreams could be made of these

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 13 November 2006

YOUR GRASP & COMMAND OF IMAGERYI S COMPELLING, DEBRA, AS IS YOUR CHOICE OF LANGUAGE, ESPECIALLY IN YOUR DIPICTION OF NATURE RELATED POETRY....'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Debora Short

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