Tuesday, February 26, 2008

***curling Respires Comments

Rating: 2.9

Wispy calligraphy draws me into
The wintered blue that eyes and so lightly

Veils her shoulders in fine–twigged taupe lace
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Debora Short
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This poem taps the senses acutely...You allow the reader to imagine taste, smell, while almost touching the body of the text....Superb imagework, my dear! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Duncan Wyllie 01 March 2008

Drawn out curly-breaths send life to her clay As if His chubby cheeks were blowing song This is beautiful Debora, , what a wonderful gift you have Love duncan X

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Debora Short

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