Wednesday, March 29, 2006

Curled Into A Ball Comments

Rating: 4.0

When things in life,
Get me down,
There’s one thing,
I can do.
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Aisha Sherazi
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Tim Casswell 01 July 2006

i like the first four verses especially. I think they stand alone and leave more space for the imagination. You have a gift for natural unstrained rhymes. Tim

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