My poor heart didn't realize,
My brain was so quick to deceive,
Curious feet jumped in love side by side,
At my age, so naive.
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This is brilliant! I love the bit about your Instincts being in on it. X x
Though i liked your great write my heart was seized of your poignant story. My sympathies to you.Let us hope for better times.
I alternated between happy and sad all through this brilliant write, .....thank you... I left laughing over the last line, many times I must admit I agree.
Oops you did it again. You touched a nerve. Your poems stay in my head, but I think sometimes you hitch a wee ride! X x x I feel every line my lovely. X
Great write, Ruby! You are truly amazing :) a great poem. We all, at some point in our lives, experience this feeling, and you describe it perfectly: -)
He has gone and my heart has turned ice cold. good. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
There's always fish in the sea, but the water is polluted with a lot of mercury poison, sometimes its best to just love reading a book. Bittersweet but SO true