Sunday, May 29, 2016

Curiosity Comments

Rating: 4.5

rose buds, what secrets are you hiding?
tell me now, don't wait till another morning

i know the dawns have been telling
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Anne Yun
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Bill Cantrell 11 August 2016

What a delightful poem here you have written, to question nature is to bring alive that voice which dwells in those young of heart. Very well written.

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Anne Yun 11 August 2016

Thank you. Hopes are also dwell in those young of heart, they still give poetry a possibility

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Unwritten Soul 05 June 2016

Beautiful poem, and the way you make it sounds so soft as if it was a voice chanting..and its mesmerizing

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Roseann Shawiak 03 June 2016

Lovely poem, I like how you've worded each line with a curious sense of imagery. It entices my mind! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Anne Yun 03 June 2016

Thank you, RoseAnn. Happy to receive your comments.

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